Hiwi the kiwi JW

                            Hiwi the kiwi

3 weeks ago Hiwi the kiwi came into our school and then all the class came into Piwakawaka and there names were Mrs Minstrel and Mr Minstrel and they taught us to wear the life jackets and some songs and my favourite song is Kaimoana and did you know that black petrol is in-danger on barrier Island?He told us some real stories and it was funny cause he always said come up here boo boo  and he bought some people up to answer questions.He was very entertaining and after the show he told us if you write the best story you will win a fishing rod and he showed us the fishing rod and then we did writing about it that is what happened when Hiwi the Kiwi came.

My Narrative JW

            In 2010 October the first in NZ

 I was digging around in the attic and found a pear of magic glasses. It was incredible what I could see with them in my house then I screamed !And saw animals in my house! And then I took them of quickly but then they couldn't come of ! I tried and tried but they wouldn't budge then one of the animals talk like a human then I was going to screamed but I sounded like a animal so then I tried to talk but I couldn't and I think they were trying two.The glasses made your eye balls turn round because the glasses were round and the leans were purple.A hour later the glass started to budge and budge and budge! then they came of! it was amazing! then I talk English and they animals were gone and was back to normal then I realised that I wouldn't have seen them.

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